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Yes, I am back.--JuneAugust (msg) 17:25, 19 mar 2019 (CET)
Re:Back to work[modifica wikitesto]
Hi, JuneAugust! Nice to see you working after all this time. Yeah, I saw your Zh translation, and it looks quite cool. What kind of troubles you find? Maybe with the translation? Pay attention for some double-informations, due to the fact you translated material from varios wiki. I suggest to cut some deja vù, like the "premium" girl question, mentioned both in the "Character" and "Merchandising" section. The content itself seems pretty good, the problem is in the notes, right?--TeenAngels1234 (msg) 17:01, 7 apr 2019 (CEST)
- Well, in my honest opinion it's better to insert all the information in a paragraph like "Impact in Europe". For example, basically all the first paragraph of your paragraph "In Italy" it's not directly linked with Italy. In fact, "numerose serie successive hanno declinato il genere robotico-fantascientifico di derivazione nagaiana", means "many subsequent series avoided the robotic-scifi genre inspired by the works of Go Nagai, like Brain Powered and Da-Guard". The last sentence is the only one linked with Italy. It means: "In Italy it was one of the works that contributed to create the so-called "Second Impact", the second mass-importation boom of Japanese animation in the country, directly named by the fans after a term used in the series itself".
- I suggest you to avoid to insert more than 2 notes in a row; many of them are avoidable or double-inserted.
- The German part means: "The series stood with other works for an adult appearance of the anime in the 1990s. She [Susan J. Napier, I think] describes Evangelion as "an extraordinarily complex work", which can be regarded as a deconstruction of the Mecha genre. The genre-typical features initially introduced, such as the young hero, a bad enemy and a highly technical near future would be reversed in the course of the plot, leaving the viewer confused. Napier regars that Shinji's first battle against an Angel has a very unusual relationship with the mecha genre; Shinji himself is portrayed as a weak boy. The fight is not a visual spectacle, but simply designed, and the music is in the foreground. Shinji does not use high technology as a weapon, but a big knife. The last episode disappointed many viewers due to the lack of action and effects, but offered a classic psychoanalysis of the main character Shinji Ikari and a personal, psychic form of the apocalypse. During the series, the motionless scenes took on a special meaning as they supported the psychological part of the plot. Physical violence scenes are more brutal than the usual TV anime."--TeenAngels1234 (msg) 16:04, 8 apr 2019 (CEST)
- Sorry, I was forgetting. The source for the Texhnolyze influence is already in the article; it's Anime Classic Zettai. You can also easily find an English translation of the booklets on Evamonkey.com!--TeenAngels1234 (msg) 16:07, 8 apr 2019 (CEST)
- Hi, June! Sorry, just like as you, I didn't find the page, but the Abstract on Google books. Sorry, I can't help you for this reference!--TeenAngels1234 (msg) 11:54, 12 mag 2019 (CEST)
- Well, in my honest opinion it's better to insert all the information in a paragraph like "Impact in Europe". For example, basically all the first paragraph of your paragraph "In Italy" it's not directly linked with Italy. In fact, "numerose serie successive hanno declinato il genere robotico-fantascientifico di derivazione nagaiana", means "many subsequent series avoided the robotic-scifi genre inspired by the works of Go Nagai, like Brain Powered and Da-Guard". The last sentence is the only one linked with Italy. It means: "In Italy it was one of the works that contributed to create the so-called "Second Impact", the second mass-importation boom of Japanese animation in the country, directly named by the fans after a term used in the series itself".